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Stealing A Rose-Chapter One by ~hypermegatailsfan:iconhypermegatailsfan:





Stealing a Rose

Another uneasy night in Mobius. Another night of gaining rest after trying to defeat Robotnik’s plans to conquer the entire planet. The royal siblings wearily crawled into their makeshift beds in their ‘underground’ HQ, tired from destroying Swatbot after Swatbot. Sonic dreamed endlessly of a giant mountain of chilidogs, making him drool over his pillow. Sonia dreamed about reuniting with sweet mother, having an easy rest. Manic, unlike the other two, was less ‘dreaming’ and more ‘remembering’, for the visions he saw in his sleep were of past memories. He had not grown up with family, like Sonic, or with wealth, like Sonia, but fought for his life in the band of thieves he lived with. He loved his adoptive ‘father’ dearly, but often he longed for companionship growing up. His wish came true when he was so little, and this night he recalled fond memories of such a blissful time…

“Look, Manic! They’re selling roses in there!” a small hand pointed to a large window.
“Just like your name.” He replied, smiling. “But they’re not as pretty.”
She giggled. “You’re silly. But look at them…they’re really beautiful. Flowers like that get more rare every day…”
“That’s cuz Robotnik’s machines are killing plant life.”
She sighed sadly. “I wish there could be flowers everywhere like that…”
He looked to his pink companion, then to the store. He slid into the store, grabbed one of the stems, then ran out before the shopkeeper or his friend could notice. He handed the rose to her, smiling brightly.
“Oh! Manic! Thank you! How did you pay for it?”
“Four finger discount.”
“Maniiiiiic.” She tsked, but giggled anyway. “Thanks. You’re sweet.”
“Anything for you, Amy…”
“Aw, Manic…”

“Manic…”

“MAAAAAAAAAANIC!”
  

A screech by a voice that was definitly NOT his friend from so long ago caused Manic’s eyes to bolt open and sit up at once. “WHAT WHAT WHAT?!?” he yelped, looking around and expecting danger. Instead he spotted his brother glaring him down, impatiently tapping one of his fast feet.
“You overslept! How are we supposed to kick Bot Butt when you’re off in la la land?” He snapped, crossing arms.
Manic rolled his eyes, slipping out of bed. “Sorry.” He muttered, heading to the kitchen to eat. Sonic followed, and both sat at a small table. Manic picked at some microwaved waffles, while Sonic swallowed down chilidogs. The blue one noticed green’s unusually unhappy disposition.
“Nightmare?” he asked, licking some sauce off his mouth.
“Nah. Just rememberin’ stuff.” Manic mumbled, letting loose a small sigh. ‘How many years has it been?’ he thought, moving his fork slowly around the plate. ‘Seems so long ago that she had to move away…’
“Glad you two are up!” came the high-squeaked voice of Sonia, strutting in. “We’ve got urgent news!”
“We’re the Sonic Underground, news is ALWAYS urgent.” Said Sonic with a grin.
Sonia rolled her eyes. “Funny. Listen, I’ve gotten reports that Sleet is leading a convoy of Swatbots to this town called ‘Lilinilia.’”
Manic’s ears popped up.
“It seems that they haven’t been able to pay their taxes, so-”
“Did you say Lilinilia?” Manic interrupted, now fully paying attention.
Sonia blinked. “Yeah. Why?”
Manic smiled. “That’s awesome! My best friend is there! This girl I met growing up! Dude, this is awesome! Awesome!” he repeated, looking happy as a kid in a candy store.
“Well she’s in trouble, then!” Sonia snipped. “Because, as I was saying, they haven’t been able to pay their taxes. A drought has wrecked their crops, so they can’t ship anything in order to make money. No money, no paid taxes. No paid taxes, robotization for the entire town!”
“Not if we have anything to say about it!” Sonic shouted, standing up. “What are we waiting for? It’s spin and win time!”
Manic was already running to their van. “Amy Rose, here I come!”

End of Chapter One~
©2004-2009 ~hypermegatailsfan
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Author's Comments

Manic/Amy.

Summary-Manic gets to revisit his childhood freind,Amy Rose. When he begins falling for her,can he make her fall out of love with Sonic,save his sister from the Knuckles impersonater,and save Amy's home town all at once?

Charries-DiC and such.

I am wokring on 'Simplest Treasure' and all that,but when inspiration hits,it hits.

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:icone-chan:
Wow! Short chappy *glaaare* but it was good! Everyone was so well in character! Those are the best fics, sometimes I have a hard time with making everyone stay in character! :D My wife writes gooood yep yep!

Btw, I hate SU with a passion but I still want to read this cuz ur writing rawks man!

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:iconbattosai16:
^_^ very good.

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^_^ And may the rest of your days be filled with joy! ^_^
:iconsamcybercat:
Well I adore SU with a passion so I definitely loved this fic =P

Very nice story, I've seen the idea of Manic growing up with a girl used in Manic/Fan Character couples before but this one seemed a lot sweeter since it was about Amy Rose :)

You wrote the dream sequence very well too, I could really picture that happening to them as kids, and I bet they'd be cute kids too XD

Even though I use Manic/Bunnie myself I still love this couple and am happy to _finally_ see it written in a fic. I know there are fics for this couple out there but let's face it, there aren't very many are there? :(

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Face it Zane, it's anime--even with 4Kids to protect you, sooner or later there'll be tentacles.
~*SmudDragon
:iconblushbunnyc3:
*gasp* OMG!!! I saw this on FF.net!!! I didn't know you were the author though! ^^; Guess I wasn't looking or the name slipped my brain... But MREEEE! I read this first chappy and LOVED it! In case you didn't know, I am a HUGE Manic/Amy fan!!! :love: In fact, I almost feel like a started the trend ;P I was a fan of them ever since like... four or five years ago, and NO one then seemed to think of the idea. But it seems to be popping up quite a bit more recently, wouldn't you say? =P Not that I mind, I love eeet! :dance:

I totally love this, SU OWNS!!! :w00t: And as said, Manic/Amy ish mah fave :aww: Wow, that idea with them growing up as childhood friends... awwww! :excited: It melts my heart into mushy lovey dovey goo :D I'm the biggest sucker for cuteness :) As others have said, you've really stuck to the characters personalities, and it's very believable how they think and act and speak... very well done! :nod: I've noticed how some writers make Manic seem like a pervert, Tails ripoff, or whatnot, and it drives me to madness to no end :shakefist: THANK YOU for showing Manic who he REALLY is! :) You so rock :highfive:

In fact, I just gotta comment on the kids conversation :aww: Dear goodness, they are TOO adorable! :) OMG, that first line of Manic's... WHAT A SWEETIE! :love: You can really tell he _means_ it too :nod: Gah, who wouldn't want a guy like him! :glomp: MWAHAH, oh I could so see him doing that! Swiping something for his girl ;P Mreee! And I love your word for it... "four finger discount" :XD: Yeah, that's what it is... ;) *whistle* Yay, I love it! :heart:

I like how this was started and the buildup and heading first chapter... nice work! :clap: I'll be definitely checking that next chappy yes :nod: This looks like a story _totally_ worth following! :D I'm sorry for not commenting on your work sooner my friend, especially when you always give me such nice comments. Forgive me? ^^; Cuz I DO appreciate your comments, you're very kind :hug: Thank you! And keep up the great work! This book worm shall stay tuned ;P

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:iconhyoko-otohime:
It's AWESOME! I love it! Manic/Amy is a rare find, and this is an awesome fic! Definitly one for da :+fav:'s
:iconhypermegatailsfan:
Thanks for the fav!

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JD: Dr.Cox..

Dr.Cox: Newbie, if the next two words out of your mouth aren't 'See ya', then the third word will be 'Oh my god. My crotch. You've punched me in my crotch.'.

JD: See Ya!

- Scrubs.
:iconkjbionicle:
Heehee, I've read this one before on Fanfic.net. Keep up the good work! :clap:

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